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Post by unknownartist09 on Nov 15, 2005 4:11:10 GMT 10
Give me and identity So I can tell you everything you want to hear Give me an false identity So I can express myself without you knowning it's really me Give me something that I need Give me a mask So I can hide behind it Take away my ability of feeling So I cannot bear the anguish of insecurity Give me life So you can take it away Or give me love So that I can live to see another day
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Post by Leigh on Nov 15, 2005 11:41:35 GMT 10
wow ... now that's powerful. Is that inspired by any real life events?
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Post by sketchpad on Nov 16, 2005 0:15:49 GMT 10
She keeps in mind to wash her brain . I remember when I knew her , she had faith enough to fake . I recall a face passed in vein . Never had a guiding light or a place to call home . Sore dried eyes , it´ll keep on welling for nothing , that´s all . You´ve bled enough . She´s running rapid with self-deception , she tried to hide it from her-self unjustified . The dagger failed her , the misconseption off a better place . The offer made to wage the answer that no-on knew . The answer , she would never blame you .. a little poem of mine, hope you like it
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Post by Leigh on Nov 16, 2005 9:48:26 GMT 10
sketchpad, u shoulda made that into its own thread Naughty, u should be punished
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Post by sketchpad on Nov 16, 2005 20:58:25 GMT 10
sry, i didnt get that :S ! Your poem was very good ! Do you write much ?
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Post by unknownartist09 on Nov 17, 2005 0:59:26 GMT 10
I writ alot and will be posting alot of em mabe all of em
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